求帮忙改错，急急急

原问题：求帮忙改错，急急急
分类：编程开发 > 最后更新时间：【2017-07-27 14:05:26】
问题补充：

Which is known,volunteering is a good way to make contributions to the social.

Last week,our school hold the 50th Anniversary and I was very lucky to be a volunteer.Due to my

fluent oral English,my duty was to serve foreigner.I showed them around our school,introduce the

history of our school.Before the activities were over,I helped clean the school.Tired as I felt,but I

thought it was worthwhile.

In the word,the voluntary spirit encourages us to help others as much as possibly.In fact,we can

also benefit much from.

最佳答案


我估计你这是在做英语改错题对吗？！

注意我加粗的，都是错误的地方，答案在（）里

Which（as）is known,volunteering is a good way to make contributions to the social（society）.

Last week,our school hold(held)the 50th Anniversary and I was very lucky to be a volunteer. Due to myfluent oral English, my duty was to serve foreigner(foreignes). I showed them around our school, introduce (introducing) thehistory of our school.Before the activities were(去掉) over, I helped clean the school.Tired as I felt,but Ithought it was worthwhile.

In the word,the voluntary spirit encourages us to help others as much aspossibly（possible）.In fact,we canalso benefit much from(后面加上it).

PS:真的很费力，不给满意答案真的过意不去了哦~haha

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挺好的，不需要大改动。。。

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